Thursday, September 12, 2013

Writing Assignment: Rule of Three (pt.3)

Why is this important?
What are the possible negative consequences if your audience is not persuaded by your argument?
 
Teachers need to know that they are shaping the future by educating the students so they can become productive members of society.  The students of today will become the leaders of tomorrow and that can only happen if they have a good education. If students fall through the cracks then they will have a low self-esteem and not want to finish school and feel inadequate. You want to teach the kids to love learning or they won’t want to pursue a good education when they finish grade school, and continuing their education becomes an option they won’t want to go to college because they struggled in grade school.  I received a public school education where I didn’t get support from my teachers and I felt as though they didn’t care whether I failed or not, made no difference to them they get paid all the same. Now that I chose, even though I struggled, to continue my education I feel as though I need to try harder than everyone else.

My choice was to work instead of going to school because I fell through the cracks. I didn’t get that positive motivation to want to learn. No one taught me that education was important and vital to my future and money was valued more than education, I didn’t like school anyways and I didn’t enjoy learning so I decided to get a job. After obtaining a few jobs I realized that I could not move up in the world or get further in life without the proper education, so I went to college, not because I wanted to or because I loved learning but because I had to if I wanted to obtain a better career and be able to provide for myself and in the future, my kids and be able to have the knowledge to help my kids with their education. I didn’t want to be stuck in a dead end job and earn minimum wage. I learned education important for a person’s future the hard way. If no one shows the students that getting a education can affect them in the long run and teachers don’t give students the attention and encouragement they need then they will struggle in life.

Teachers are an example of a successful career and life for the students. Students spend more than half their childhood with their teachers and the other half with their parents, the approach that the teachers take towards teaching and their attitude will reflect how the students will treat their education and their future careers as well. If the teachers act as though they are just punching in a time card and collecting a pay check then the students are going to treat their education as if it is not important because the teacher is showing that they don’t not care about their education either, monkey see, monkey do. Students cannot see the whole picture, that their education they receive at present will affect what happens to them in the future. They need someone to point out to them that education is crucial as well as the students themselves. They need someone there to show them that they have the potential to move mountains. If students do not have a positive role model then they will automatically be closing doors that would have been open for them if only someone showed them the way.

Tuesday, September 3, 2013


Krystyana Molzen

English 1A

Sept. 1 2013

 

Teachers are not passionate when it comes to teaching in the classroom.

One reason could be because they were pressured into pursuing the career path of a teacher by their family.   If a teacher is not passionate about their job then their not passionate about teaching their students and then the students will in turn care less and have less motivation for a successful career.

Students should be able to pursue the career path they want to as to ensure success. In the article in Womens Health Magazine “ Love your job: meaning is the new money” by Lesley Rotchford she states  “New research shows that when passion and purpose are your biggest drivers, your bank account often ends up thriving too.”  This quote from the womens health magazine shows that students can pursue the career path they so choose because it can make their desire to work stronger and they will be thourough  and precise and pay attention to detail and they’ll want to work and do good at their career and  then the money will follow because of their attention to detail and drive to do a good job. 

So if teachers were passionate about their job and being a teacher was the career path they wanted to take they will be more personal and care for their students and  their education.  In another article from Forbes magazine  called  Turning your passion into business: hit the ground running she says “if you have a passion for something – you’re commited, and if you’re commited you want everything surrounding that passion to be amazing. Almost similar to what I said earlier that if you have a love and passion for what you do, you will do well in your success as well. You will want everything to be perfect which ensures success most of the time. So all in all students should be able to pursue the careers they so wish to because it may effect the future and education of another.

Sunday, September 1, 2013

I havent quite figured out how to make my blog look the way i want it, this blog stuff is quite confusing but what i do want it to have is few of my favorite songs and pictures of my friends and family. music is a very big part of my life and i am very picky about what i listen to on my own time. I am very family oriented and have a small but amazing circle of friends.